Haha,
Well its notbad, not sure howmany of these i have seen, but they are interesting, maybe abit much on text but it was interesting, you should add more animation though, anyways notbad on this one.
Needs more animating.
~X~
Author Comments
It's Superman Brokeback style! The history between Clark Kent and Lex Luthor has always been an interesting one, but this one side of them many have never noticed, or dare to dream of. In this chapter it tells of Clark and Lex who are two curious guys who find themselves in love…
it is stupid
your flahes are disgusting, you shold be baned
no...just no!!!
DUDE!!! COME ON!!! what was that!?!?! there was hardly any animation in that at all!! it was 99% text...and you shamed Brokeback Mountain by using the theme song...SHAMED IT!1!111!!111!!11!
and when the scrolly text actually went away there was still no animation except when Lex glided over to Clark..and that wasn't even a real kiss..!! xP it was just overlapping..
you don't seem to have very good Flash skills and i suggest you just stick to fanfiction. :/ seriously. your writing skills are farrrr better.
I'm blamming you for crimes of exposition!
You know...there's a reason flash was created and scrolly text wasn't it.
lOOL omg xD
Its Booorriiiing