Not the best.
I am a maggot, a juggalo, and other things, but the whole Clown with chainsaw is in way to many spoofs of Slipknot.
I'm more into Slipknot that LB, Also, if you are remaking it, make it longer, use a better flash engine, and much more violent, comeon, most of us are maggots who watch this. As JovialSpectre said, more violence. plua, to make it a little bit better, ask more seasoned NG veterians, like johnny utah, or even better Sickdeathfiend, to help with violence, shoot outs, melee violence, shit like that.
Keep trying man,