Not bad.
As this being your first flash, I will give you some credit. Yes, I saw some glitches but the overall movie wasn't half-bad I suppose.
Good luck on your other films! :-)
Author Comments
This is my first flash, and obviously, I still need lots of work. Hopefully I'll get better as time goes and this flash allowed me to use several different forms of animation, which was fun the whole wway through! This is a new verios, the song in the last was to short! Enjoy my terrible randomness!
FeudalSamurai responds:
Upon further retro speck upon this flash...as teh creator,....I sy it sucked terrible for the most part, here and there some good things did happen maybe 2 at most, but it was lame and only axctually probly took me about...6 hrs all togetehr to put together...if even that
work on ur flash homes
some of those were alright, but when like um pikachu just split in half for no reason and there was a worm thingy that alsoo got cut in half, it was just 2 weird! either work on ur flash and try sumthing like this again, or u could just not do this type of flash and try sumtin else cu zit was just random things happening to good flash characters. good drawins of da characters though
FeudalSamurai responds:
Yep, that was basically my ultimate motive, random violence to important characters lol, next time I promise to do better, but I don't think I'll be doing something like this for quite some time, Thanks for your review~!
Wierd but funny
It's pretty funny to watch and it isn't bad :P LoLz I like it <3 U can make some backgrounds though :P Or maybe some voices.
FeudalSamurai responds:
I plan to make all my backgrounds really good in the future. That was a major set back was having to draw them all in flash and not using photoshop, simply cause I didn't kno how lol!
I'm confused
I like it. I don't know why.
FeudalSamurai responds:
Lol, it's good to see that even my work is enjoyed by some people! Thank's bunches man, I hope to do alot better in the future!
Mindblock.
cough. I have to agree with this being slightly offensive. When I saw it, I kind of.. froze. But from a strictly quality-based view, it's not too bad for a starting movie.. I guess. The music's totally irrelevant - kind of knocks the whole thing onto a lower platter. If you're going to have music, have something that fits. Random, frequent/infrequent bouts of colour kind of threw me off as well. It's.. mind-boggling, I guess you could say.
You did get their permission right? They should at least know if you're openly dissing them and all - this doesn't even amount to criticism.
On another note - let's see what you can come up with next.
FeudalSamurai responds:
Ya I know it's confusing. Please forgive. I maed the mistake of looking for a music after I was done, and it was hard as heck. When I compressed the file, it compressed my song too, and messed it all up, But overall I;m quiet happy for my first true animation! Next time I promise to make it work your time
