gizmo13 had it EXACTLY right
Please seriously consider his review.
Excellent sense of motion! Real nice flow!
You are hampered by generic characters and generic sound. Please, step back and create more unique characters or at least borrow from a more diverse realm than just the stock anime, cookie cutter, mega man-esque characters.
You are very talented and will grow with time.
I am ashamed on NG...
I have been here a long time, and I know what submissions deserve, and this deserves a MUCH higher score than it has, I am seriously shocked. It deserves to be in the top 5o for years to come, and win all the big awards, and all of that. Unless of course it was rotoscoped from Naruto, which I doubt, because noone there looks like that...
this looks like tv material.......
seriously this lloks like Naruto a bit its so awsome! the motions between each part are so flawless, excellent charecters and a cliff hanger ending. i saw your other flashes and you need to get your work looked at by agents or somthing, with your talent i wouldnt be surprised if you did tv shows! this is definetly the best flash ive seen on newgrounds, your a true artist and i hope to see more from you soon.
P.S. theres a part when she doubled i yelled out "Kage Bunshin No Jutsu!!" that part made me laugh =(^-^)=\m/
That flash was righteous man.......after making something like that, you should make proffessional cartoons/anime or somn; that was just a damn good flash.