(( notbad ))
this was notbad kinda funny, could use some improving some effects to go with the backrounds but as for the commentary it was ok, the one thing that bothered me was the size it could be compressed better.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You could get much more views to your flash if you lower the size of it, some slight compression here and there may it be intense graphics, music or whatever the case, just try and cut here and there and you will notce it slightly smaller and will be good for your flash and the viewer download time.
Big file but has some funny moments.