Hey Jade, Loid here. Nice work, Im guessing Jade is some kinda machine? Or is this a flash to represent your Stories you wrote on Deviant? Well nice job there :D To bad I dont play graal anymore or I'd Huggle you with my Zombie Loid!
Yep.. Well its the start of many, hopefully. *Hug* Thx luv. <3
It won't be worth anything if this is all there is. You said it was an intro. If you make a compelling story to go along with this intro I'm sure it'll be great.
Good work Jade. o_o In the story I didn't expect the intro to be that long, but that's good 'nough. The graphics are maybe a bit crumby here and there, but the whole atmosphere compensate for this. ^ ^
Keep it up, and bring in the other chapters! >:3
Aw, thanks Lance <3. I'll try, but you know how slow I am.
The graphics need major work, I agree. Thanks for the review, Vardo >=D
This is good for an introduction to the story, but there should have been more, but still make more so we can see the rest of the story :)
Keep up the great work! I eagerly await new chapters.