My third movie on NG...
A dark comedy short, may contain content that may offend some people so watch it at will.
George and Tiffany are bored, what are theyre gonna do about it?
Decent animation
Notbad, i like the black and white style, and some silly music was notbad either, the art style was decent and showed good effort, It was hard to read the text as it was a simular color to backround colors or just really light, what you could do is add a black bar behind the text so it is easier to read.
Decent black and white flash.
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Needs work...
I thought the use of the Stones for you open was great, it really worked; but you didn't edit to the muzik. Try using the trastion to the horns in the muzik as you edit point for your establishing shot, in this case: the house. Then a smooth, matching fade of the music as you zoom in on the house. Also, it's usually a very bad idea to use muzik with vocals under the character dialog; and in this case, the level of the muzik was at least equal to, if not higher than the level of dialog... This makes it VERY difficult to focus on & understand the dialog (VERY distracting). Try using instrumental muzik (if muzik is needed at all) under your dialog & use a ratio of 60% - 70% for dialog levels & 30% - 40% for muzik & SFX, except when it comes to SFX like explosions & gunfire, mix those at abot the same level as dialog. There are parts of your art style that look very much like David Firth's style of art, I'm not saying you stole it, I'm just saying it looks very similar; maybe this is coincidental, maybe not. The voice work could also stand some improvements in both acting & recording. I hope this review has ben helpfull & I hope to se more from you in the future. Regards, ZB.
yes
baby killing is always funny
Meh its ok...
It dragged on a bit much. could have been condensed a bit more or at least have more happening than just one gag. As for the sound, you popped the mic a bit much. this is probably either because you were too close to the mic or the mic is dusty. Clean the mic, sit back from it and speak like you normally would, that way you dont get those annoying pops in your sound file.
LOL
Ok you need better fps, a better mic & way longer aniamtios and you might have it.