Been working on this for 5 days now. I don't know all the ropes when it comes to flash animation and this is only my second movie to date so please keep that in mind. I'd love to hear your comments and suggestions/tips. I really hope you guys enjoy it and help preserve it. Thanks
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~~REVIEW~~
This was fun and some nice interactive to it but it could have had some improved visuals,a nd more effects all aroud, but i had fun with it so nice job on this, hope to see more of your games and animations soon.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effects all around more improved graphics aswell.
~~OVERALL~~
Fun game like movie.
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Umm
More of a short Interactive Animation than a movie.
Misleading Title....
4/10
Interesting...
The idea was pretty interesting, although I think I kinda jumped the gun when I read the title - I was assuming it was be some kind of comedy adventure following a pinball through its nightmarish trip through a pinball machine, as it attempts - without success - to escape. But then again, that's just how my kerazy mind works.
In light of what you actually produced, however, I'd say this isn't too bad for a first attempt. But on a somewhat more serious note - dear lord, did you tween ANY of this?! It looks like the entire thing was done frame-by-frame, and if that's the case, hot damn lol. For stuff like fight scenes and character movement, fbf is great, but when you've just got a ball bouncing all over the place, for the love of God! Learn and use tweens, they'll save you hours and hours of moving stuff around for no reason!
Good luck with your next Flash animation.
*psst, i'm using a cheap ass version of flash called 'swishmax'* lol. whats tweening?
not bad
not bad but i think u should have chosen a bigger table height n width cause we all love to see the flipper's whole game zone not only the part where the ball actually is,u didnt even chose the default table in flash which is 550-400
i wanted to go for a more cinematic approach with the panning on the ball, also because im not too good at flash ;) thanks for the review
Nice
Overall this was a very nice score. Very creative. Let's see how you did:
Graphics- Fine, fine, I got no trouble with it.
Style-Very interesting and professional.
Sound-You had nice sound, no offesnse, but the music was annoying.
Violence-Why violence always its pinball!!
Interactivity-well the beginning was creative when You had to push the ball upwards.
Humor-Awsome humor because of your creativity as well.
Keep up the good work!
5/5
thanks man