I gots me a broken ankle :O
that musta been a pretty small rock :P The person's graphics weren't bad, but the rock coulda used some improvement. Also coulda used some sound.. >.> The moral thing wasn't expected, but was also weird O_o
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This, my friends (and possible unfriends), is something I threw togehter one boring day, then found it again. I think it was funny, so i thought "Heck, why not sybmit it to NG?"
And here I am!
Alright..
Not too bad but you should considering updating it with maybe some voices and more detail in the background.
Not too bad .....
........ it wasn't great either but worth protecting. It was cute.
Put a bit more effort and come up with similar humor and I'm sure you'll do well here. ^^
short but decent.
Good moral but.... oh i dont know just keep it up! Pretty good but like the last guy said, room for improvement.
Deku
Could be better
It could be better but who cares W00T! I'M THE SAVIOR!!!!!!!