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TENTH ARMY 3

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this is the beginning of the push into the center. but its just starting

Reviews


Decent.

You did alright some things you need to take into perspective is,
1. You need to be able to skip that intro of reading if we want to you will get a lot of blam points off of that. And someone like me can make or break that.
2. Sound in the intro is also very important, Its like a movie you want a begining that will grip you, Not just a bunch of words, Then you want A plot A story so riviting I want to watch it the climax and then your ending.
Your flash for a sprite movie was alright I would have voted much much higher if the intro was better. I usally do vote after the first three seconds of a flash. But something told me to keep watching I did vote to protect however.


hellhunter1 responds:

psh OK so i see ur one of the relaly into it guys on newgrounds i am to so then message me in a more detailed explaination why it wasn't good


Very nice work of sprites.

I see you have some technique with using sprites, that is a good thing when it comes to these kind of movies.

The story line came together pretty well, but it could be improved.

Keep it up.


hellhunter1 responds:

allright we will yeah i like your movies to


Finally!

Yes, the first good new submission that I've seen in, like, two days! You'll be the first out of many not to get blammed by me! Excellent job!


hellhunter1 responds:

THANKS. IVE BEEN WORKING HARD


Awesome!

*Does first review dance* Ok. I... just don't know what to say. That was one of the best flash movies i have ever seen here on Newgrounds... i mean... ok, that was just awesome. Make more! please!


hellhunter1 responds:

thanks dude and yes there will be more

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2,724
Votes
306
Score
3.10 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 21, 2006
11:50 PM EDT
Genre
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