You did alright some things you need to take into perspective is,
1. You need to be able to skip that intro of reading if we want to you will get a lot of blam points off of that. And someone like me can make or break that.
2. Sound in the intro is also very important, Its like a movie you want a begining that will grip you, Not just a bunch of words, Then you want A plot A story so riviting I want to watch it the climax and then your ending.
Your flash for a sprite movie was alright I would have voted much much higher if the intro was better. I usally do vote after the first three seconds of a flash. But something told me to keep watching I did vote to protect however.