I'll say the same thing as the last person who saw this movie.
that was funny
that rocked but u need more funny
Its been done.
Your inspiration was all of the mario parodies on Newgrounds. It's all been done before, though. Nothing new or interesting. EXCEPT...for the water douses fire. That was pretty good. Bring in more ideas like that, and it'll improve.
Decent, I think you could do better. Made me chuckle.
As My Name States
There's nothing really interesting or funny about it. The fire flower joke was A good one, try again and star from there.