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Turkey dumplings.

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Nice. You can draw.
Just add a storyline and it could be something special.

Caz responds:

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hmm... not the worst movie on newgrounds =D

its not really good i mean i dont understad that movie its just boring and pointless

I dont like it, sorry

Lot's of promise no dice

This piece does have major aspects that can work for it but that does not make it pass through the portal. I loved your drawings and even the weird killing of everything.

The problem with this piece is there is not point to it. As an animator, we need to give our audience direction. Animations to short to get a point across fail to captivate your audience. I liked the teddy bear and the evil skull but you lost me. I could not understand why the bear randomly killed every thing.

Give us a story and you will pass through the portal no sweat!

Yea..

Graphics - 8: Very beautiful graphics. Indeed.
Style - 4: Is this one more of these lame "harr adventure!" flashes...?
Sound - 6: Nice background music.
Violence - 2.
Interactivity - 3: You could've got more points from me adding buttons like play, pause an stop.
Humor - 0.
Overall - 7. Pretty good. Too short, pretty weird but good.

Work on it

you had some great drawing and the movement was okay but you really need to work on a better story line and then youll really have something good luck

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Uploaded
Jun 18, 2006
12:42 PM EDT