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Gunhand Billy

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Any feedback at all would be great. this is a class project and I had to do a "fairy tale". Well I made up my own ... it doesn't make a whole lot of sense, but what fairy tale does?

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So... Much... Potential...

It's funny, I had no idea what to expect -- the music starts, and the credits roll, and I'm thinking "what, it took two of them to pick out the music?" -- and then the singing starts and I realize it's original music -- fantastic!!

And then I realize I can't hear a damn word you're singing. Well, okay, about every third word.

Looks great, SOUNDS great, it's got a SCENE MENU (hence the 7 in interactivity) -- maybe the animation could use a little more work (it's opretty simple stuff, mostly)...but you need to either mix the sound better or stop mumbling.

Good job, though! Please please please try to do something about the sound... or give us a subtitle option!

reverendJ responds:

there is a second version with subtitles already loaded up.

Protected

i protected it and it showed me the flash protection movie xD

zoomie

Your drawing is great... but thats IT Your music isnt clear enough, I couldnt make out what the lyrics where and it was just boring

I thought it was good

I liked this flash a lot, the song was a little hard to understand, i had to watch it a couple of times to understand some of the words...but other than that great flash!

reverendJ responds:

thanx, I am addding subtitles to the next version so hopefully that will help out ... I'm not what you would call a ....singer.

Pretty Good

It was good, however I didn't really understand what they were singing. It would've been much better if you had added subtitles.

reverendJ responds:

I agree with you. I will add subtitles. Thanx a lot!

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Uploaded
Jun 18, 2006
2:26 AM EDT