Er...

Maybe you should name it "Very simple AS Tutorial". I would like to point out some things that sucked about the tutorial:

1. The actionscript was too basic. I mean, come on, any inspiring flash artist knows that.

2. There were...3 subcategories? Don't you think you should include more things in your tutorial?

3. Even if your tutorial was meant for "complete noobs", which I think it is, you should at least add some step by step guides. Hell, some don't even know where to insert the actionscript. Give examples too.

4. There were errors in your tutorials in Basic Movement. Look at the code there, I don't even want to bother to tell you.

5. The button section was completely redundant. You made it so your tutorial will seem to have more content. Include it in the Timeline Control section.

6. The text was too small. Increase it.

7. The music sucked.

8. Your attitude sucks. Just because someone cannot do better than you in Flash does not mean he cannot critisize it. Do you not laugh at the mistakes made by international football players?

Therefore, I gave it a 4.

As tutorials go, this one's just ridiculous.

Unfortunately, I can't be nice about tutorials like this. It looks like it was conceived by a twelve-year old and here's why. It has this obnoxious GOTH overtone, which right off the bat obliterates any sense of helpfulness the tutorial has. Red text on black background? Hellooooo...that's each character like a fork in the eye.

And System of a Down? You wasted all this bandwidth so I can download Chop Suey!? Doesn't that seem at all in any way in any semblance cheesy? Tutorials are quiet boring affairs, and decorating it with wasteful rubbish like CHOP SUEY blaring in the background is the most detrimental element this piece has against it. Talk about a horrible waste.

Crap wording. Crap look. Crap layout. It's unapologetic crap.

ok...

Common, you can do way better then that!
You just dont got any ideas, try
looking at[ w w w . a c t i o n s c r i p t . o r g ]
and then you can see how much of AS you don't know.

snore...

All it was is buttons and basic movement. Now I have made flash and I can tell you that is easy stuff, some of the most basic AS there is. And what is worse is you spell like this: this is enoying, you erahgular, ediot... wtf, who looks like an idiot?

Anyway, next time you do a tutorial, make it look better, put WAY more stuff in...

Nice Improvement

I remember the last one. It wasn't that good, but this one is a lot better. Great job improving!