(( Voices could be improved ))
This was actually a good flash i especialy like that player at the buttom it was verys leek looking, and gave the flash more style, as for the clay it was notbad, and the "VOICES" were ok but could be improved to sound more like there characters, anyways nice job.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some improved voices aswell as some subtitles judt for the improving of the flash.
a decent clay flash with a nice design and neat idea to it.
You just need to work on your clay mations a bit. Try making them longer and have more of a background. Try to get your voice a little lower so the people don't always sound like children. Im not dissing you or anything I'm just giving you my words of advice! :)
When i saw the post below me i thought "It can't be that bad?" But after watching it... YES IT CAN! It was completely pointless! Not funny at all, and the clay people in it was one-colored. If it was funny it was O.K. But when its not funny, you could atleast do a little extra on the graphics!
Come on! You can do better than that!
P.S. No one is stupid enough to give their father a card for fathers day.
P.S. no-ones stupid enough to care alot about a snowman that drowns in a swimming pool and kills himself to get the snowman.
P.S. -Knox-:Klay Swimming Pool
for my fathers present i would like(look below)
You NOT to submit this piece of crap !
you act like a 3 year old or as another definition in the dictionary.....jboxer
That was wierd
But still it was funny!