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Chapter1: Flash Tute Redo

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This has been remade and added to. this is my lowest rated submission on Newgrounds.

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I kinda liked it

I liked the song that was used in it aswell.



Cool

Hey, thanks for using my totally shit song in your flash!
This was helpful to me, because I know nothing about flash cartoons, so any tutorial is a good one in my eyes!
Nice job.


PixilProductions responds:

That song was funny and kinda fit in with the low rating of this flash so I put it in. Good Work on the song!


4

When you make a tutorial, I would recommend that next time you use better examples than stick figures or if you do at least animate them in a better sense, draw them in a more distinctive way. Tutorials are something that are hard to rate especailly if it does not practice what it preaches. Not saying you are not, but I think this could have loocked better. When you show script, the option of making it easy to copy and paste could really be benefical to someone trying to learn.

I would recommend improving the general outlook of this chapter and the concept before the next step.

ry



Not That Great, Sorry

+COMMENTS+:

Well, this wasn't a completely awful flash. The style of this was okay, and there was some interactivity. I gave humour a 1 because of that stick man at the end (that's a good thing). However, there is no sound, and that is a very big problem. Although the arrows looked nice, and were fully clickable, the overall graphics weren't that great, sorry.

+OVERALL+:

Review: 4/10
Voting: 2/5



Generally bad.

If there's one thing I can't stand, it's a total slaughter of the english language, bad grammar and spelling are horrible when they fall into something such as a tutorial, something like a tutorial should be taken seriously, and should consists of clear, properly formatted english, I personally couldn't stand to read through the whole thing.

Making tutorials is easy, and kind of an excuse for a submission, if you're not the best, then why preach what you don't fully understand yourself?


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2,182
Votes
298
Score
1.68 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 14, 2006
5:59 PM EDT
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