I kinda liked it
I liked the song that was used in it aswell.
Hey, thanks for using my totally shit song in your flash!
This was helpful to me, because I know nothing about flash cartoons, so any tutorial is a good one in my eyes!
That song was funny and kinda fit in with the low rating of this flash so I put it in. Good Work on the song!
When you make a tutorial, I would recommend that next time you use better examples than stick figures or if you do at least animate them in a better sense, draw them in a more distinctive way. Tutorials are something that are hard to rate especailly if it does not practice what it preaches. Not saying you are not, but I think this could have loocked better. When you show script, the option of making it easy to copy and paste could really be benefical to someone trying to learn.
I would recommend improving the general outlook of this chapter and the concept before the next step.
Not That Great, Sorry
Well, this wasn't a completely awful flash. The style of this was okay, and there was some interactivity. I gave humour a 1 because of that stick man at the end (that's a good thing). However, there is no sound, and that is a very big problem. Although the arrows looked nice, and were fully clickable, the overall graphics weren't that great, sorry.
If there's one thing I can't stand, it's a total slaughter of the english language, bad grammar and spelling are horrible when they fall into something such as a tutorial, something like a tutorial should be taken seriously, and should consists of clear, properly formatted english, I personally couldn't stand to read through the whole thing.
Making tutorials is easy, and kind of an excuse for a submission, if you're not the best, then why preach what you don't fully understand yourself?