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because that the best kind of afro

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Pretty Good

That was pretty cool. I liked the street style you gave it. It was pretty hard to sometimes read all of the speech bubbles. It was pretty short though.

Mad mouse skills.

Nice artwork. It was kinda hard to follow along at some points, but it was good nontheless.

not yet

its not ready for newgrounds.... it needs voices for speech and to be merged woth numbER 2..


I went 3/5 on this. it's very different.

Only issue I had was sometimes the speach bubbles went by way too fast and the typing was very small.

Clean up a few things and this'll catch on.

As-is, I believe it'll get through although in the beginning I was starting to think it was just a loop. I gave it a chance, the train left and they started talking.

Cool stuff!

Not bad.

I found this strangly amusing. Hope it gets through judgement, and I'm waiting for #2 =D

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2.67 / 5.00

Jun 14, 2006
3:23 PM EDT