(( OK ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, kinda neat actually, but it was abit on the short side, you should add more because the artw as decent and you have a sorta idea here, notbad of a start though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and with more to see.

~~OVERALL~~
A short animation with some promise, and decent artwork.

~X~

a good start

that's what it is, a good first chapter. to the dude below me, who are you to tell others what to post. seriously, who the fuck are you? that christian guy posted a mature, well thought out response based on his beliefs, and even said, sorry if this offends anyone. you fucking prick, how dare you attack him for that. you immature fuck, learn some tolerance. it's not jsut a christian moral.

to guy below me

tetanda DONT POST ABOUT RELIGION!!!! Fag!!!! oh and in the bible, two fully evolved humans suddenly pop up on earth. Bullshit!!!!!!! so shut up about the bible. i cant believe you were obsessed enough post such a fucking long review.

Pretty good so far.

If a flash isn't complete, I'm sure you're meant to submit it to the NG Alpha thing. Anyway, I thought it was good so far. the whole routine thing isn't really an original idea but I can't really say because I haven't seen the rest so I don't know where you're going with it. I can't really tell if it's going to be funny or have a message or what because I haven't seen the whole thing but so far, I like the style and I think it looks good so far. I was kinda disapointed when it ended so soon but I guess it's because I wanted to see more. I'll be waiting to see the whole thing. Looks like whatever you do with it, it should turn out pretty good. Please prove me right.

Sorry about the next paragraph:

To the person that reviewed before me: The meaning of life is simple. it's in the first chapter in the Bible and if your holy text is a science book, it probably says in there and if you are of a different faith, I'm sorry but I don't know. Anyway, in the Bible, when God created man, he told man to 'Go frth and multiply' At least I think that's what the christian meaning of life is. And in science, life doesn't really have a meaning except to survive. And how does a species survive? Breeding isn't it? What I'm trying to say is that christians and atheists believe the meaning of life is not sex but to have children. I hope i'm not wrong about that and I hope I don't offend anyone.

nice

You did the theme very well. I have to agree with the point you make in this although I am known to be negative. The monotone voice and the animations all fit together to create a dull, boring, experience (what you were aiming for I hope). Brings up the most asked question since the beginning of time: "what is the meaning of life"

Nice job 5/5