well...

OK, this was not a good flash at all, most of the images looked like they where traced, and i know it cause Ive seen the real ones.
it all started off randomly and that was a little annoying, but the thing that got to me the worst was the song choice, yes Manson is a really good artist, but it can easily seem very out of place if you don't do it right, and you didn't at all.
other than that, i have to say that ultimately for a first flash, its decent, but personally, i wouldn't put my first flashes here on NG.