Cute
It was short and sweet. I found it mildly humors. Very good for a first time.
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My first flash animation (I'm still learning).
I made it for my assignment. I had to make a "creation myth".
I chose greek myth and twisted it abit ( maybe it ended up to be too complicated)
I'm so sorry if my animation is a bit rough and short,I'll try to improve it on my next animation.
All feedbacks are welcome.
cheers!
Its Very good
You gave this entry a 5, raising its score from 2.6953 to 2.7048
Wow, I like your drawing style, I think It could do with smoothing out a bit, But It was good and told a story. A score of 2.7 is pretty good for your first flash too. Every Flash I make normally gets about 2.6 :P
cheer-devona responds:
thank you :), I'll smooth the animation later :)
Very nice
For a first flash, I'm truly impressed! This reminds me of a story from Greek/Roman mythology that tells how the people of Africa got so dark by some fool took a joyride in Helios's chariot & brought the sun too close to the earth & scorched Africa.. Mythology's messed up, isn't it?
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this is your first flash? that's really good ! it's funny how they have tv's and crap ha, well done though!
Not bad for a first!
Hey there, not a bad flash for a first try at it!
my first and only flash i ever did never got in..i was sad..but it made my friends laugh..
enough life story!
Good stuff. It'd be something interesting to watch for a school project too. Liked the whole girl doing her aerobics thing. had a slight chuckle.
I'd like to see some more! keep at it. ^_^