Not Bad. Really!
It would have been better with sounds and more colors to add "life" in this flash--but it's a passable work for starters.
Your anime style is unique and really lovely but since it's anime and anime is commonly used in this world, I gave your Style a 9 instead of a 10.
And don't you worry, for the loading time took only 5-10 seconds and the flash was worth it. I'll wait for the continuation of this one.
Keep it up!