Not too bad
I feel that everyone is taking this alittle too seriously...
Yes, it could use some work.
Yes, the poem is no Shakespeare prose.
Yes, the graphics are not quality.
BUT!!! This still deserves some recognition as a beginning flash. You people shouldn't be stoning this guy, more so you should be encouraging.
I give this a 6 because it still holds merit, and some level of work actually went into it. Keep up the good work.