please oh please with a little please on top......
put more blood in it.
it was good....
it was good but coulda been a lot better if you woulda put more blood in the beginning. maybe make it longer too. overall a decent submission. 4/5
hey its ashton...again ^^
plain violence is gooood
heh alright I am gonna stop reviewing all your stuff and annoying you for now soo bye!
Call me a stupid kid if you'd like, but...
I think it needed more blood, too :-p
Overall, I liked it, though. :-)