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Elven Wars

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This is our first movie. It took us a week to do. We hope you like it!

Please Review. If it's slow, please lower the quality.

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Grat traler

I hope this is a traler for an upcoming produchen becus this loocks swet i hoop to see more from this consept

Elvomir responds:

Ofcourse it is. I've started on episode 1. I'll make it better than the trailer. thanks for the 10!

i liked it could use sound effects but i liked it

i liked it could use sound effects but i liked it. it had good grafix and the music was good exept for it cut off near the end. that is all i have to say.good job.

Elvomir responds:

the sound cutting off is a glitch. In flash, when you test movie, its fine, as soon as we published it, it was fine, as soon as it got submitted, something went wrong.
Sorry :(

Agreed with 65th angel

The graphics actually weren't bad. They did their job. But I feel like just a little more effort into detail would have gone a long way. The grass was plain green, the sea was blue, the flags were pure red with maybe a gradient. Basically it needs more visual interest in most of the shots.
Some sort of story or background plot wouldn't hurt either. The sound got points off because it ended a few seconds too soon.

Good job! I love this kind of stuff. :D

Elvomir responds:

Cheers. It was our first try. We'll do better next time.

well done

the music fitted well

the graphics need 2 be some better...the soldiers were nice and that skull effect was good but the elves faces need improvements and the background was cheap

tips
-more models
-make everything some faster cause it was a bit slow
-boring?? yes it was a bit boring make a fight in it...its not way that hard to do and can amuse the public

i would give a 5 to some1 who has done some more movies but since this is your first(newgrounds submited) flash i give it a 6

more effort in the graphics and fights will make this flash a lot better and may interest people

hope this review was useful

Elvomir responds:

Thank you for the tips. There used to be more models, but this computer is unfortunately a bit slow, it couldn't handle more than a few animated movie clips per frame.

Next time, I'll be hoping to have more people and better graphics.

I second that

You use fast cuts, close-ups and rythmic cutting like a pro. Maybe you do need more graphical polish, but there´s lots of potential!
IMO, you should now devote most of your energy to get a good story going, then get some decent voice acting together (REALLY important!), and maybe just a little more fluid animations. Never mind about the style or the details, I think it´s the right mix of ingredients that makes a good movie!

Elvomir responds:

Thanks very much, i'll take that into account.

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Score
3.54 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 31, 2006
5:51 AM EDT