forgive me for saying this, but i see so many "holes" in your work. it is a good start for future movies that you'll be making. you have the talent; you just have to shape it, trim it, and hammer it like iron while it's still hot. kinda like making a sword. or, better yet, making a diamond. you have to attain that "perfection". in order to do so, watch other sprite movies, not only here, but also on other sites(don't know where, but i know there are A LOT of them). another thing to help boost your talent. be a director. i know you are laready, but you have to "FEEL" being a director. you have to be strict on your project, and prevent mistakes at all costs. put your hear into it, though, because if you don't, it'll look crappy no matter how "perfect" your flash movie is. it takes time. no worries, no need to rush. practice makes perfect. must have a long and captivating storyline to make people watch your movie more, kinda like attracting people to buy your stuff ^_^. Last, but not the least, looking forward for your next work. i bet, it'll be "100% better" than this one.