very nice start i like the animation i felt sound could have been better but none the less a very good start look forward to seeing more of this in the future
The meaning earned it a 10
Those who couldn't see the symbolism in it, that's fine. Those who don't UNDERSTAND what it means, that's all of us.
Yet is still makes me feel something deep down.
Well done. This really is a moving flash. I won't give strraight 10s, because that's not realistic. The art was above average, the sound was not good, violence was symbolic, humour isn't in this type of animation and the style was the meaning.
This is a great beginning to a great series!
Dubya tee-eff mate?
Blue-haired underwear chick is sleeping. Blue-haired underwear chick wakes up. Alien-angel thing has fallen and it's made most unequivocally clear that he ain't gettin' up. Alien-angel disappears, gasp, he leaves behind an apple and his wings. Blue-haired underwear chick comes outside draped in a sheet. Blue-haired underwear chick and leftover Alien-angel wings and apple disappear, gasp, again. Blue-haired underwear chick appears back in her apartment and in a drawn out impressionistic sequence, bites the apple. Woo, cinematic, gasp. She goes to sleep apparently and wakes up and lo' and behold her bra is off and she has wings. So yeah. Cut to money shot of her illustrated boobs to achieve some kind of impressionistic effect that's supposed to be artsy, and cut to black screen. To be continued.
i really enjoyed this submission... but if i may amke a suggestion, it might be a bit more intriguing to add some music. possible something by the band NightWish if you havn't heard of them, they might be just what you need to accent this beautiful animation
To short... Way to short
This was way to short and needs etheir better sounds, or music! The animation was okay, but you could do better with that and some other things.