I expect a full lenght movie from you
that was very good, and if applied to a movie( make sure it has an aweosme plotline) then you can be on the frontpage easy, and add detail like faces and clothes
Very short sctick animation (~23 sec), my first submission on NG, but i think not bad at all, and worth seeing. (some dbz inspiration)
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I expect a full lenght movie from you
that was very good, and if applied to a movie( make sure it has an aweosme plotline) then you can be on the frontpage easy, and add detail like faces and clothes
can some1 say welcome to newgrounds?
well that was better then i expected...
for a first submission u kik @$$!!!!
i look forward to ur future submissions, next time try to semi put a plot into ur stik thing so ppl don't kill u wit that wen they review it.
also, did u happen to watch dragon ball z be4 u made it or did u come up wit the hair and the blasting beam by urself? if u did good job on that part but if u got the idea from dbz, i suggest noting somtn bout it in ur credits cuz wen u get way high up there (and u will!!!) and u base ur stuff off of other commercial things then ppl will kill u wen they figuire out that u stole the move from some other movie or game and that u didn't even put it in the credits...
just advice.. it was perfect but needs to be a bit longer, at least a minute and a half.
thats right, i was inspired by dbz, but i thought that everybody know that; however i will write it now.
thanks for review
well done, needs SOME work
I like the whole "Dragon ball z (C)" thing. Its not half-bad.
Good
your a very good animator, and with practice you could be much better. you have to keep making movies! that was great for a first try!
Good
For a First submision thats a Nice piece of work :D Well Done...i havent submited anything yet...but i will :P