what a waste of time

this is retarded. i blammed ur other new one too. this is stupid man, at least this one has art, until it ends after a few seconds after a few seconds that it has began. the only fucking reason ur shit made it this far is cuz ur idiot friends most likely helped you with the grading and reviews. but i wont do that. HAHAHA!
...just....well.....jesus.....i dont know what to say after all that ive said. i know im a little harsh but your art pisses me off god jangle. .....just work on it. A LOT!

Fuck thats funny

I love this even though its short make longer ones and youll get more attention

PurplePenguinLock

yeah

^^Good Points^^
The graphics weren't bad at all. I liked your shading and the animations weren't bad either. I thought the ending was kind of funny as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
As you probably have already found out, this is a bit short. You could have added some scenes from before where the movie started to make it a whole bunch better.

Way to short

Ask any one here and they will say it was way too short. It is all about some guy running away from a rapist and he pops out thats it.

Jeez...

Using that same robot voice for every character is REALLY annouying. Half the Lock flashes are like 10 seconds or under. This really lacked... everything.

And even though your flash was about 3 seconds long you managed to fit the idea of raping or another unpleasent thing in. Niiice. -.-