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=This was made for my Animation class, and is my first finished 'real' flash. Please don't blam it=
A man goes to make a deal with a shadowy figure, but eventually takes matters into his own hands..

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shitty

it started off okay, but then it just got stupid. you really seemed like u just faded off and sunbconsiously started mimicing Madness with the whole thing. imitation is the best form of flattery, but why did you not stick to the simple story that you had going that was at least decent?

Good

Its pretty good, but the graphics sucked.

Alright

Original and action-packed. I like how you made the dealer completely black. Nice style there.

However the graphics sucked. Work on that. You have lots of potential.

6/10

Keep them coming.

Nerd-101 responds:

I can draw good with pen and paper. I'll probably just trace my storyboard and animate in Flash next time (if i can be bothered.) Thnx for constructive criticism

Not too shabby...

Considering it's your first attempt, it was good. I'm sure that you know your graphics aren't the best, but the use of focus and an attempt for 3d was decent. Although it didn't have a unique, nor interesting plot, I can tell you put alot of work into this.

well...

it was alright but it didnt make much sense

Nerd-101 responds:

With the exception of the breifcase beating people up, it made perfect sense...i think..

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May 26, 2006
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