Lol
The animation was Ok better than mine (if mines not blammed already lol)
But the joke were so funny and the voices were so funny.
Author Comments
This is my third episode of Living Causes Death. Pedro the Roach and Rajiv go to the midwest to meet women, but get pulled over by a hillbilly sheriff. I know, I know the graphics kinda suck, the lip syncing is off, but I am working to improve it.
mikegupta responds:
Haha thanks, I need an army of animators like some users on NG
I like the message.
Good message. That really happens more than you might think. I hate the way our racist government labels anyone who disagrees with the current administration a terrorist. The real terrorist is in the White House. Sorry for my little sermon,back to the vid. The animation could use quite a bit of work..but got your point across which is the main thing. You need to get ya a talented artist to help you put your ideas to better use. Keep up the good work,you direct and get someone to help with the special effects...LOL.
HMMMMMMm
the animation sucked. I couldnt tell if the mouths moved or not. The voicces were funny and i liked the jokes
Egh......
Wow....that was horrible.
Keep on practicing man. You have potential, just you need to practice.
not bad, not good...
HITS:
-good humor (punch line is the highlight)
-good choice for travelling song :D
MISSES:
-virtually no animation 'cept a few tweens here and there
-lipsync was terrible
-the gradient on the white guy's shirt was horrible
OVERALL:
not overall horrible, but not the greatest. keep trying...you'll get there.