This was a pretty good flash movie... I liked it, although I didn't watch all of it. Nice job!
The story needs some help and so does the audio
The voices are way too low but the music level is fine. You need to balance them out. The graphics arent bad but the story is very lacking. Its uninteresting and very anticlimactic. The pacing is a bit slow.
I actually completely agree with you in the story department. I'm not a good comedy write, just a serious writer. I had so much trouble getting the punchline in it correct.
improve your stuff
the problems are that you should improve the storyline seriously also fruits with clocks walking around looking for a tv? plus the fruity gay graphics? man you need to improve your storyline
Let me guess, you didn't get it?
Very good, love the intro music
Im a big fan of coheed and cambria, so i have to love the intro music, the flash was great, i love it when people.. or pineapples.. are stupid
hey isn't this the same as the Aubergine one? When Zappa comes him he calls Pineapple Aubergine. lol funny how no one noticed. XD