All right, Great music
The song used while they are talking is lilium by elfen lied which is amussing, then you used senses fail rum is for drinking not burning which was really funny. All though you should really try and follow the actual Odessy.
Author Comments
*EDIT*
Wow~! Thank you all for watching and reviewing my animation. I really didn't think anyone would. I appreciate all of the comments and scores I recieved.
I'm sorry that it wasn't more serious, that the voice acting sucked, and that terrible little man at the end which I removed, but let me explain.
The animation would've had been much better if I had more than one day before it was due. I could've added all the things I wanted to add if that happened. I apologize immensly for the horrendous voice acting aswell! I had to do it all myself so being the girl I am it was quite hard. And the silly little man at the end. I was just bored. Sorry.
Oh and for those of you wondering why Telemachus isn't there or why it doesn't match up with the original story, it's because the project was to create an adventure story following it. And I decided to make a trailer. ^.^ Easy points. And another thing, this isn't my first and it's definately not the best... I'm sorry I had to put this as my first flash submission. I'll post my own original animations when I find the time.
Thanks again! ^3^
Glomper2000 responds:
Thanks for your review. The assignment was to create your own story... So that explains that.
Well animated...Poorly voiced
I really appreciate your submission and your choice to have a you Odessius. Remember little Telemacus must be born sometime before his father leaves. If you would like a villainous Posedon I would be happy to send you the waves needed to spruce this up. I do a pretty mean villain laugh.
Glomper2000 responds:
I know I didn't include Telemachus. I planned to, but I just didn't have the time to do what I wanted with this... Like the voice acting. Yes I am well aware it sucks... But I had to do it all myself and I am definately not a voice actor. Thank you though.
As a flash, good.
Though short, it wasn't bad. The animation was nice, except for whatever that thing was at the end. I know Poseidon's voice is low, but that was too low. Other voices were fine. You said that this is for school, yet this doesn't follow the book. This might be because your making your own version, but you know if that's or not. If it was longer, it could have been front page material.
Glomper2000 responds:
Yes I really was hoping to do alot more with this, but time was short. I needed it done. And I had to do the voices myself, which is hard since I not a guy... Thank you very much for your review.
Fair
Compared to some really crappy stuff I've seen, it was allright. I actually think the characters were done well, good expressions.
I'm glad you put subtitles in because otherwise I would not have known what the hell Poseidon was saying.
As for the ending bit demoticblade's got me covered.
Anyway thumbs up!
Glomper2000 responds:
Thanks. And I apologize about the ending... I changed it... I just got bored.
Meh...
The animation was decent, but I thought the story was a bit lacking. As mentioned before me, Poseidon's voice was horrid. Also, watch that you're not breathing into the mic too much, because I noticed that particularly after Odysseus was speaking. I was expecting more of the Trojans, maybe the battle with the Cyclops and such upon viewing the title. One last thing, I'm pretty sure Hades is the name you were looking for instead of "Hade." All in all, not bad, but just keep on truckin'.
Glomper2000 responds:
Thanks for the review. The story follows the Odyssey so there wouldn't be much with the Trojans or the Cyclops. It's set in a modern world... If I had more time more of the story would've been added, but I was in a rush. And Hade is a typo. And I suck at voice acting.
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