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Vengeance: The Crane

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the intro text in the beginning:

in the far away east
a fighter from Japan
came to the land of China under the freezing Winter
searching for a crane with blade fans who took away her virgin past (long story)
for revenge

the cute ninja girl is my friend nechia's char. and the creepy guy ... you are in his gallery.
asi hasn't kill nechia straight forward, because he wants
I always want to animate nechia naked...
my first ever pure fighting animation.

it's just so hard for myself to describe how happy when finishing an animation (specially dream fairy).

in five more months, there'll be someone going to teach me how to animate for the first time ever... I really can't wait.
I think Vengeance will be my last animation before university (or might not ^_^) , because in next few months, I'll be really busy on searching house, moving house, visa and many things...

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Nicely done!

Frankly, there are only two things that need work on this: Fix the background pixelation, and neaten up the characters. I have to say, even with slightly sub-par graphics, this deserved an award. I enjoyed the character design and the style, but my favorite part was undoubtedly the movements. Both characters move cleanly and quickly, and you use very few still tweens. When you do, you've got movement on the objects themselves, which keeps things nice and fluid. Good job!

it was good

that was well done in my books.

graphics 548/1000
style 657/ 1000
sound 800/1000
voilence 500/1000
interactivity i do not know what that is
humor 123/1000
overall 1000/1000

yes i know the two rateing thing say difrint stuff but plz do not be mad with it

have fun and love ya

Pls, For god's sake..... Chinese on NG.....

Not every one on NG can read chinese like me. Other then that, no comments.

great job

very fluid and smooth, liked the instrument, though could have been a better song. it still needs some imporving but with practice it will come. good job, love the story

NICE!

I like it, short, sweet, and very straight forward. I must say that if you say your an ameture, then you have very little to improve on to work in the big leagues! I hope to see more of your work.

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Uploaded
May 22, 2006
5:35 PM EDT