not a bad idea
this was not a bad idea but it could of been put together better.
Interesting animation, the music was a nice tough, but it seems to droput halfway through the animation,
your character was also ok but could use some fine details, other then that it was notbad
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Less thicker lines on the outline of the character can be a start
Good start but needs improving
Thank you for your Review XwaynecoltX, i appreciate your tips, and thoughts on this animation. I've recently been working on improving my artwork skills, and I'm currently remaking this series with the same general ideas. I hope to see your comments and ideas for the remade version.
You've put effort but could use some improvements.
I liked the story line but some graphic and sound issues were bugging me. Well, since you put ALL effort to make this flash, I'm going to give you a 7. Good effort. Keep trying...
thanks ^_^ i may make a sequel or remake sense my ability to draw back then wasn't to great as well as the factor that I'm a lot better with flash effects and have a clear sound recording microphone now. but thanks for the support and thanks for the review in general ^_^.
There's always room for improvement...
it's not terrible but not good either. the drawings can be improved and the voice acting or lypsincing wasn't that good either. other than that, the emerging storyline shows some promise, keep at it.
i didn't like it
it was not pleasing to look at