needs work
it ends too fast and there is alot missing from the plot
Author Comments
!EDIT!: I've been told that the text boxes go a bit too fast, so I'll try to sort that out for the next episode and yes I know it's a bit short I kinda ran out of ideas for that episode so don't blam me! xD But other than that thanks for the great and helpful comments folks :D - Chansen
Well here it is as I said on my brother's account.....
CRIMSON SKIES - Search for Wind
This is the first episode of Crimson Skies it is a hopeful HUGE series and I'd like to add that this is my SECOND flash attempt ever my first was Random Training....Well enjoy and if you find any problems or bugs just tell me and I'll have a look at em... - Chansen
Congrats!
You're now an animator of STF! Hope to see longer flash movies from you! Good one for a first starter I voted 5! You have to thank STF for saving your movie : ) XD
Nice One
Hey Joe It's Me AX Aurion That is one Great Sprite Movie You Made Keep up The Good Work m8 & im Looking Foward to Ep 2
Pretty cool
It was short the text was a bit too fast but other then that it's all good keep up the good work
ChansenOrsan responds:
Thanks Reds, and yeah it is a bit short but I'll fix that all for episode 2, it's mainly cause my mum and dad have been gettining on at me :/ but if i can be arsed I'll one day remake it when my skills are better
desent
Text was way too fast. Animation was good though, slow down text and make it a bit longer and you have a good flash