ok

it was funny. great work baron. lol

It was good clay-mation

But the jokes where rubbish. Slow and poorly timed.

haha

That was pretty funny, with the Gumbi guys going "WHEEE!!!!" over some crappy kiddie slide. lol

Good Start

I see your off to a good start...

But your idea it geared around Knox's form of art. He has the same thing but without eyes on his clay people. The jokes are close except your clay men have accents.

But again it's a good start but if I where you i would go a different direction with ideas. You don't want an artist slamming you with copyrights for a simple idea you used close to their own.

Once again though you are off to a good start. That was pretty good for a clay anime. It was clear and the sound wasn't to shabby ethier. Well Done.

Claymation

This could have been better, the main aggrivaiting thing was that there was a (what I thought) annoyingly long wait in between dialog. However, I'm rather fond of claymation, having spent alot of time watching Wallace & Gromit. Nice work, practice the audio, otherwise great claymation.