Wow
There a big improvement here. There's a lot of effort put into this animation. Welld one.
Author Comments
This is the second episode. It pretty much takes up where the last one ended. PLEASE WATCH THE FIRST ONE!!! If you havent already. They should be seen in order. its easier to understand that way.
ENJOY!
A lot beter
this one's good
Ahh..it was ok..
Some little things were left out, and I wasn't really sure who either of the guys were. And that one line: "What did you do to me?" " I shot you in the heart, don't you remember?" Was kinda, well, predictable and unoriginal. But all in all, I liked where it was going, and I hope that the characters personalities will be seen in part 3.
Goofy
The plot has some serious issues. He shot him in the Heart, but oh wait he didn’t want him dead yet he shot him in the heart. And was that a Pokemon ball, because it looked a lot like it. This is one goofy flash.
ART-TRON responds:
sigh...
Yea basically these guess have history,and he knew only shooting this guy in the head would kill him. Basically I am introducing these characters, but I want to slowly show what there weaknesses and strengths are.
and yea I guess it does look like a pokeball. but how many ways can you show a laser shooting sphere.