realy lol to see but its realy (sob) pathetic (sob
lololololol roflmao
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This is my first flash movie. Its about 2 slime balls who become friends.. for a second. POW
I'm a Time Mage at <3
This isnt terrible. Dont believe what you see in the media. So this is what happened, i went to the general store and asked for three italian rolls. The thing is, their rolls were nasty but i didnt tell them (lol). They read my mind. As they whipped out the shotguns i laughed and as the sweat dripped from my brow i suddenly squealed because i didn't squeal actually a pig did cause i stepped on it. Then i ran and hopped over the fence and it had barbed wire on it jk it didnt i was jk relax i was jk it didnt have barbed wire on it, i hopped over it and then there was a meadow and a few puddles of happiness which i allowed myself to go in because.
ThatRoomThere responds:
I still hear your voice, when you sleep next to me.
I still feel your touch in my dreams.
Forgive me my weakness, but I don't know why
Without you it's hard to survive.
'Cause everytime we touch, I get this feeling.
And everytime we kiss I swear I could fly.
Can't you feel my heart beat fast, I want this to last.
Need you by my side.
'Cause everytime we touch, I feel this static.
And everytime we kiss, I reach for the sky.
Can't you hear my heart beat so...
I can't let you go.
Want you in my life.
ROFL LMAO
HAHAHA look at the sun nice work rofl hahahahahahaah it has one tooth
ThatRoomThere responds:
Who are you, i swear i've never met you.
nice
It's an interesting start. However, it should be longer and maybe the graphics should be fixed.
ThatRoomThere responds:
really? i liked the graphics, but yeah, it does need to be longer
Liked it all but the ending was too abrupt
I liked it all, except the end was too abrupt. It wasn't what happened, just that one moment there was action and music, and the next nothing. That's okay to end a fast-paced short with, but something that was flowing so slowly and leisurely should end with more of a "fade out" than a sudden stop. It's good enough as is, of course, that's just my honest thought on one part of it.
ThatRoomThere responds:
k, thanks for liking most of it.
im going to change the ending though and resubmit it
