not bad
its a good movie with a good idea i like that graphics and all but there is always room for improvements. One thin that u could so would b to fix the music and sounds u need to put the music on at the right time in the story and sound effects at the right time there was a part of the story were the music just stops u should slow it down a lil bit b4 stoppin it if u do that Second u could also add voices instead of reading third even though the graphics r good they can always b better theres not much else i can stay since this is the beginning so u proably hav plans to make the next ones better good job wit this one though