Just a quick short I did the past few days. I just wanted to work on lip syncing. Please leave as many crits as possible. IM gonna go back and rework it make it a little longer and better. So please help me by leaving some crits let me know what you would like changed.
(( Add some subtitles ))
~~REVIEW~~
Notbad on this the graphics was decent and you presented some nice animating, and most of all it was funny and made me laugh, i do however think you should ad some subtitles as it would only improve on the animation.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles.
~~OVERALL~~
A decent animation, could sue some subtitles though.
~X~
Heh
The graphics in this flash were good. The animation in this flash was quite good. The lip syncs, that wasn't bad. The sound, I didn't like the voices in this flash. It did annoy me a little bit. =( This flash, heh, as soon has he said Houston, I knew he was going to say something like we have a problem. XD Well, nice work on this short flash.
/Mathias Andersson
constructive review
dude the flash was very good but you have to work in your lip sync (is good now but can be better)
everyone loves fart jokes....
i like fart jokes too! :D as long as they are good fart jokes.... this one was kinda stolen from rocketman, but other than that, you did a nice job on the lip syncing (helluvalot better than I ever will... that crap is hard for a noob like me) but I kinda like the houston guy being scrawny and the astronauts being huge and muscular... just now it is in real life! so... yeah... PIZZA!
nice job.
i really liked it. it was funny, the graphics were good, but the only thing bad was the lypsynching. it wasn't actually that bad, just really late. make it a bit shorter, and this would be nearly perfect! good job.