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~~REVIEW~~
Lol this was funny and had abit of info to go with, you should improve on the characters and backround abit with more refined looking characters and more detail in the backrounds.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effort on the detail such as backrounds and some character work.
~~OVERALL~~
The sun, kinda funny and with abit of info.
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