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Hello everyone, I am back with a test on how to write a proper review, if you complete this test with ease then you obviously know how to write a good review, if not, then make sure you get some practice and check out "how to review (underdog of the week)" for other tips and tricks on writing a good review.

Good luck and hopefully you'll learn something from this!




(true opinion)

I loved the part where it said, "HURRY!!" in big red letters.
I like all the Newgrounds-related stuff that you do.
Keep it up.

I liked it

I really liked that. Hopefully it will shwo a lot of epople how to review better. Now im not saying giving a bad review is abd but give some thought and a bit of niceness so they can appreciate your complaint and maybe fix it.

100% =)


I really liked it, it was a great idea, and I hope more poeple do stuff like this. I recomend that you use a different text, it was a little cramped and hard to read. Other than that, great job!

Nice little game, also an learning experience ;D

Yayness, I passed the test, I'm a good reviewer! <3 It was a fun little game. The screenshots were kinda bad quality though, so you won't get a very high score in graphics... Also, you could have also reminded people to use correct grammar and punctuation in their reviews... A review is not uselful to me when I can't comprehend what the reviewer is trying to say (though it's even worse when the whole review consists of cuss words.... *shudder*)... Anyways, good job. :) I think that every reviewer should watch this! I'm adding this to my favorites. ;D

PARAGON-pvp responds:

Thankyou very much for this review, it's much appreciated, and since you're a flash creator and if you have any extra time on your hands, please make something on this topic, because we need to get people to stop reviewing the same as a guy a few reviews up,,, thanks again



It's great as a tool to teach people how to review, but the choice of font and colour made it hard to read. The screenshots of the newgrounds website were also incredibly small and difficult to read, and personnaly i don't see the point in timing how fast you reach the submit button. I like to read over my reviews before I submit them anyway.

This flash as great potential, but make it a bit longer and more detailed, and also avoid using screenshots that big that are scaled down.

PARAGON-pvp responds:

Alright, if this doesn't make it i will for sure fix it up and maybe even try and just partially copy or make my own thats similar to the setup of newgrounds but only use bigger font, thanks for the review


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Credits & Info

2.11 / 5.00

May 5, 2006
10:12 PM EDT
Simulation - Other