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this is a short movie I made about the shut down of LockLegion.com.
I was kinda lazy when I made this ( excist is mispelled I know) so it is not of my best ability.

this is a Lock Movie but watch it before you vote please.

enjoy!

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K

^^Good Points^^
For a quick job on this movie, not too bad at all. The drawings were half decent. Your characters looked pretty nice, and you had good shading and coloring throughout this movie. The storyline wasn't to bad. I thought the ending was pretty clever as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
There isn't a whole lot of animation in here. The only thing you really animated consistently was the speech indicator. That made the movie a little boring, since nothing much was happening the whole time.

CourgetteClock responds:

Thanks dude.
I realize it´s a bit dull but I was a lot less animator back then.

Not as Good as Some of your Other Submissions

+COMMENTS+:

The graphics and style weren't abd in this I guess, and it was kind of funny.

+IMPROVING+:

The voices were hard to ehar at some points, and there wasn't really very much animation to this at all. Also, what happened to the 'Lock Legion' pre-loader (althugh I notice that the infmaous 'PALY' is still there :).

2/5

CourgetteClock responds:

yeah this was a rushed project and back then my skills were a lot less then those other submissions.
thanks anyway

Yay!

I jumped out of a plane!

Great work Minish!

5'd the shit out of it

Thanks for the Cameo!

Hurley

CourgetteClock responds:

tnx
your the best plane jumper there is

Minish

Penis

Oh Hi Minish. =D

5'd.

CourgetteClock responds:

Fanny

Oh Hi Fire Hydrant

5d(wtf?)

It's hard reviewing movies like these

This is another of many movies on Newgrounds that are low on content but high on technical prowess. I thought that the graphics and animation were quite good, though the voice "acting" was a tad grating.

Alas, I'm all about the content. In terms of story or humor, this just didn't cut it for me. Sorry, but I have to vote for a blam. Better luck next time.

CourgetteClock responds:

okay.
tnx for the graphics score.

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Score
2.87 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 5, 2006
8:59 PM EDT