Confusing

I think the main problem is that I don't know the backstory behind this. The flash is ten years old now, so any ads from that site that would have appeared on Newgrounds are long gone. The fast that the graphics are minimal and the sound is nonexistent except for the end hurts this flash as well. The story was interesting though, from what I understood.

Not funny

I have never seen these ads or even heard of the site, but from what I see here I can only guess that this is a poorly done spoof, your characters looked ok, but you used text rather than voice, the animation was poor, and there was no sound.

Erm, what was that?

Well that was pretty random, an old lady gave some woman some money then the woman started dancing, it wasn't funny and it wasn't interesting, there was just no point to it whatsoever, you should ahve came up with a decent, funny story and made a movie rather than submitting this. You should have had more sound in it and you shouldn't have had the buttons that you had to click on to get to the next bit of text as it just wasn't neccesary.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

Hoop...

It missed the mark! Hoop it missed the mark!

Huh?

Im really lost. whats goin on? why'd momma buy a monster????