Thank you Daemonia94 for supporting NG!

We're 15 people from our target today. Why don't you be one of them?

You can support NG too and get tons of perks for just $2.99.

Create a Free Account and then..

Become a Supporter!

Ocean Breeze Finance Loan

Share Collapse

Author Comments

Do you need a loan? Then come phone our friendly stuff that will loan you a ton of money, then take your house away if you miss one payment. We offer hugely ridicules rates yet offer a kind and simple service for the customers who don't understand the concept of money. So come sell your soul and future away to us for peace of mind and a load of money charged at 54% APR over 45 years *Now with added music by popular demand*

*this is the second flash I ever made and I would love to have on newgrounds, please vote generously and be forgiving*



This was abit odd kinda interesting though, you do need to reduce the file though, but i must say this was sorta funny in its odd way it was interesting i didnt get much of it.

Reduce the file size so that it doesnt take loads of time to download, look for areas to compress, maybe the intense graphics or the audio needs to be cut, but whatever the case try and compress it.

Big file odd flash.


WARTORIOUS responds:

This was amazingley orgasmic and kinda interesting! you do need to increse the file size though, its amazingley small, but i must say this was sorta hilerious in its Stunning!..> way it was interesting i did get much of it, nay, all of it!!.

Increse the file size so that it takes loads longer to download, look for areas to stretch, maybe the awemley intense graphics are too awesome, whatever, but whatever the case try and con-tooth paste it.

small file like my bits, however awesome flasher!



that was a pretty strange and unusual animation. i wasn't all that impressed with this one, but you did put a fair effort into this one, so it didn't suck.

you can improve you know you can

im am sorry it should have get you a lot of work but i dont like it
here is something you can do to improve your flash entries:
1º-improve your graphics work hard on them
2º-the sound was just not not good, improve it too
3º-you can always put more humor more jokes you know those kind of things
4º-and this is optional, you can put more gore on your future entries
5º-make that people interact more with the movie
HEY!im beeing honest okay?
keep it!

WARTORIOUS responds:

Thanks man, I do appreciate your honesty, this was the second flash I ever made, and decided to put it on NG.

Yes, I do agree with what you said, and thank you.

Interesting, but...

I understand the spirit of humor that the flash was made in, and the use of semi-abstract shapes was actually relatively impressive to me. On the other hand, the animation was always very cluttered - you have multiple things happening on different parts of the screen at no particular order, it was very distracting and caused my eyes to wander. The message itself was alright, but it got a little repetitive later on.

People find this review helpful!


well... I understood the message (if there was sumthin to understand)


weird style tough... you should work a little more and put a background music

I like the "loaner" face (got to get back to my vocabulary)

Click on an icon to vote on this!

Credits & Info

2.37 / 5.00

May 3, 2006
7:28 AM EDT
More Movies