(( COULD BE IMPROVED ON ))
This was notbad, but could be improved on, i liked what you had but first off the file was very large and should be atleast half, just because alot of us have slow connections and computers, nice job though.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Reduce the size for starters.
Funny entertainment but needs some reduction.
Who wants to watch a 320x240 pixelated film? Try submitting to a film review portal next time, newgrounds is for Flash art.
If you're making a movie using film, make a story board, choose camera positions, and don't start unprepared.
The guy who was holding the camera was shaking and I couldn't see what was happening, atleast not good enough.
And credit your music next time please, I remember that first song from a long time ago, but now I can't find out what it was because you didn't credit the author.
Not for here...
Submit it to channel101.com, you might actually stand a chance.
wtf dude.. W-T-F
That hasn't got the slightest thinf to do with anything, was that even using flash. And not to mention it was a pointless pile of crap. Please, please don't make others again.
If you do, I will burn them down. All the rest will die along with this one.