some work on overall....

no sound that would make this sooo much better..... and like said in the previous reveiw... the movement of even just the flys and the frog would have made it better....

... Errrrr...

Well, the flash isn't as terrible as the overall score might denote, but I have to agree with some of the previously stated points.

Audio! Sound effects and music could make this much more interesting to view, even though it's rather painfully brief. Being on a 56K connection, I can appreciate the want of a small file size, but it's so small as is that it couldn't hurt.
The graphics are fun, I like how things were made purposefully messy, as well as I like the chosen colors, but it could have had more work put into it. The frog could blink, or the insects could actually flap their wings, or the cat-tails could sway, or the clouds could track across the sky or something. It's just so... bland.
Following up that point, the humor is somewhat amusing, but it's a cliche concept and can't carry the entire video. It's a good effort, it's just simply not enough.

And this is possibly just a personal bias, but a 'start' and 'replay' feature would make me very happy. ^_^

not very good

If you're a beginner this is fine but it really needs some sound.
the actual flash would do well as before movie short or during a preloader

decent animation but still sucks

make a real flash next time,you got some skills

Not too bad.

I was expecting something terribly brutal, judging by the current score, but it's decent.... the low score is an under-statement... though this really isnt that great, it's better then whats shown.
It's short, and there's no sound, but I like it because it's funny, and that's good enough for a sub-par mark for me!