Shame You Cut It Short
The Animation was great, just a shame you had to make the ending so short. i look forward to seeing your future work :D
Your great at drawing and flash animation! Why did you do this? Got lazy and filled hal;f the toon up with words! The ending was so built up and then was over in seconds. Bad writting.
I didn't get lazy..I had to submit it by a certain time so I did what I could to finish in time.
This is a real anticlimax. In otherwords: the end sucked. You should have made a better ending...
ok...like 20 seconds of my movie made my score drop down to 0?
That doesnt seem right o_O.
And everything would have been alot better if I didn't have to meet the deadline.
Good job , i understand that you had a deadline and it had to be rushed and i still think its turned out great so good job. Theirs not much else to comment on.
(ps. im finny06 from F.I)
the whole narration thing....toss it and animate it. will dramatically improve this flash. otherwise i can't give this much more than a 7.
There is such thing as a deadline you know..I BARELY made it with what I have.