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^^Good Points^^
The graphics were an interesting style. I liked how you used higher definition sprites and backgrounds for this. The storyline wasn't too bad, but nothing too interesting.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think the perspective you animated this from is a little strange. Something don't look natural when placed in this. Also, the animations are very repetitive and really the storyline is a little bland, so work on that.

(( Could be improved on ))

~~REVIEW~~
Well its notbad, i kinda like it, it could use some work though as in a better way to move it along other then the buttons and such, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some reducing of the file would be a start.

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting, could use more effort on animation and such.

~X~

That was bad.

The graphics where off, it just seemed all off. I don't like how you have to press the button to move the text on. Its not really funny. Its kind of pointless. I think it could be good if only a little more effort had been put into it.

Hmph

lol The girls were walking on top of the guys!! I don't know where you got the sprites but that clearly ain't done in Flash, the Flash part is very minimal and might I say, amateurish. A black dot for a continue button is not very informative...

alright

It would have been really good with the exceptiont that the english was really hard to understand at times, plus the spelling errors. But otherwise, i really liked it.

Kathleen