(( Entertaining ))

~~REVIEW~~
Lol this was funny and entertaining with some interesting characters and amusing humor, i had fun watching it, it was also abit on the strange side but thats what i liked about it, anyways nice flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing it seemed fine to me.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and interesting characters abit on the starnge side though.

~X~

Sort of a 50-50 there!

Its not good, and its not bad, but its progress! Keep it up!

You have allot of potential.

But you really need to work on the drawing side of things. The character design and the first scene when he's watching TV had a nice style going there, but you completely ruined it with most of the rest of the movie. Just be more patient and draw the things yourself instead of using the line tool, it looks so much better.
Aside from that.... I liked the Humour, you give thirteen year olds a good name for once, if you really are thirteen anyway.
I liked the scene when he's glaring at the service guy, it's kind of rare (On NG) that you see people using dynamic editing to compliment a mood.

Soooooo... Next time, improve the drawings and try to have a bit more of a plot, or at least work on making it flow together more naturally.

i liked it

Good job man. Just work on drawing and you will make some good movies.
Btw i voted 5
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that sucked

here all all he reasons why i didn't like this movie 1 it sucked
2 it sucked
and 3 it sucked more than paris hilton sorry it's true